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I have to admit, I felt a little bit nostalgic reading this: It reminds me a lot of some of the experimental short stories and flash fiction I've written in the past, heheheh~

I very much enjoyed the realistic stream-of-consciousness writing style!  It's a technique that's tricky to execute—it's always so tempting to want to clean it up, to make it neater and more structured, often ruining the intended effect in the process—but I think you did it quite well here.

In a way, this VN feels almost like a painted portrait (or perhaps a photograph): A brief, static glimpse at this character and their thoughts and feelings at this moment in time.

Nice work on this one~

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Thank you so much for these encouraging words!! I'm really glad my words are resonating with players.

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such a little treat for me. love that i can just sit on my floor with my laptop and be transported into someone elses mind across the world. 

stay strong, potentially fictionalised person, things are beautiful

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really cathartic

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Ah, so grim in a way that speaks truly to me. A "nice" simple story that caught me off guard, parts of the writing truly feel taken from the worst parts of my heart.

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pause 9999 over and over. that was pretty good, simple and sour

I love calling it "simple and sour".