Pedestrian Passing
A downloadable game
An existential walk home. Roughly 10 minute read.
TW: suicidal ideation , self harm, and mention of disordered eating.
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A downloadable game
An existential walk home. Roughly 10 minute read.
TW: suicidal ideation , self harm, and mention of disordered eating.
Click download now to get access to the following files:
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I have to admit, I felt a little bit nostalgic reading this: It reminds me a lot of some of the experimental short stories and flash fiction I've written in the past, heheheh~
I very much enjoyed the realistic stream-of-consciousness writing style! It's a technique that's tricky to execute—it's always so tempting to want to clean it up, to make it neater and more structured, often ruining the intended effect in the process—but I think you did it quite well here.
In a way, this VN feels almost like a painted portrait (or perhaps a photograph): A brief, static glimpse at this character and their thoughts and feelings at this moment in time.
Nice work on this one~
Thank you so much for these encouraging words!! I'm really glad my words are resonating with players.
such a little treat for me. love that i can just sit on my floor with my laptop and be transported into someone elses mind across the world.
stay strong, potentially fictionalised person, things are beautiful
really cathartic
Ah, so grim in a way that speaks truly to me. A "nice" simple story that caught me off guard, parts of the writing truly feel taken from the worst parts of my heart.
pause 9999 over and over. that was pretty good, simple and sour
I love calling it "simple and sour".